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Speedrush's fan-fic shop


Well I'm a fan-fic writer ***Warning, I give ALOT of details.***
Detail EX-
Shadow saw Blazingsoul, his claws out, he growled "Now Silver we attack now!" Shadow jumped into the camp and attacked Blazingsoul, Blazingsoul was caught by surprise, she lashed her claws at her attacker. Shadow attacked Blazingsoul with his razor sharp claws, he ripped down her flank. Blazingsoul yowled and fought back, but something pushed Shadow off her and pushed her away, it was Silver! Silver looked at Shadow and growled "This is your last try Shadow, give up! I know what my fate is!" Shadow looked at him and mewed "Silver...I thought I could trust you...." His eyes burned with hate, he growled "But I guess NOT!" Shadow thrust his body at Silver, he felt the evil spirit from withen take over his body, he had all the powers of evil! Shadow clawed Silver's flank, Silver yowled, but he did'nt give up, he bit down on Shadow's leg, blood splashed on Silver's face when he bit Shadow's leg, Shadow yowled and bit Silver's body, his silver pelt stained with blood, he yowled "Why are you like this!?" Shadow continued to fight and yowled "I am Shadow, Shadow the rouge! This is who I am! I am going to destory this stupid forest!" Silver looked at his eyes, they were lit up with fury, they continued to fight, blood spilled everywhere as Blazingsoul watched helplessly.
The two toms continued to fight, Blazingsoul watched in horror as fur and claws flew, her eyes full of sorrow, she mewed to herself "I wish this never happened..." Shadow jumped on Silver, Silver yowled as Shadow dug his claws into his side, his whole body was bleeding, you could'nt barely see his silver fur. Shadow and Silver jumped away from eachother, they stared at eachother for a moment, then they both made a great leap, Silver and Shadow met in the air, Shadow sliced his claws down Silver's chest, Silver's chest was bleeding massively, Shadow landed on the ground, Silver fell on the ground, he did'nt move, Shadow let out an evil laugh as Blazingsoul ran into the clearing and over to Silver, she looked at his red body, she shook his body with her paws mewling "Silver, Silver." Silver made no response. Blazingsoul looked at his wound on his chest, it was deep, she lifted her head and yowled "NOOOOOOO!!" Shadow ran out of RustClan camp, laughing.

Blazingsoul sat in the camp next to Silver's body, she had nearly cried her eyes out, she was the saddest cat in all the forest, Blazingsoul looked at all of Silver's wounds, she could tell he had put up a great fight, she just wished he did'nt lose his life fighting her brother.

See what I mean, I get EVERY detail, so feel free to request and ^^ That up there is my fan-fic I am still writing so check in on Moonstar's site to find out what happens next. But I bet most of you already read it *Looks at Pearldust*


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thats really good

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